devans house

-
Devans house
I went in devans shiny awesome car It was a cool car we went to his house.husten was coming to. I got a burger my mouth crunched into it. It was so nice. the cheese was melting in my mouth.
Then we went to devans house it was so fun playing on the play station 4.we played Nerf with all of Devans Nerf guns.

Then we had to go to a meeting we played outside. the sun  looked so beautiful.we played super heroes it was so fun.then after we played at the meeting we had a big feast it was so fun.

Comments

  1. Anonymous2 November 2018 at 09:44

    i like how you told me about devans house, next time you should make the writing not go out.

    O҉L҉I҉V҉E҉R҉ B҉L҉A҉C҉K҉

    ReplyDelete
  2. Anonymous2 November 2018 at 09:52

    and to fix it, every time the writing reaches the end hit enter

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about