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Kia ora Baxtor, I love your piece of writing because it is funny. When you gave the writing to dad his reaction was funny. Did you think about saying how loud his farts are. Why did your class make happy farters day card.
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Kia ora Baxtor,
ReplyDeleteI love your piece of writing because it is funny. When you gave the writing to dad his reaction was funny. Did you think about saying how loud his farts are. Why did your class make happy farters day card.
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