happy farters day

We were learning about the book farters day
I found it easy to wright
I found it hard to make my dad
I really enjoyed making funny jokes
Next time I need to make my people beter

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  1. Kia ora Baxtor,
    I love your piece of writing because it is funny. When you gave the writing to dad his reaction was funny. Did you think about saying how loud his farts are. Why did your class make happy farters day card.

    By your sister Isabella

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